Things I like: That you separated socioeconomic status of childhood from adulthood, 7 sins/7 virtues, disillusions from childhood, chinese zodiac (this is very neglected by most ), separated nationality and ethnicity.

In the "vital statistics" field, I know what you were going for, but by including birthplace, political party, hobbies, and other non-innate characteristics, it feels sort of redundant because similar information is required elsewhere. For example: political party under vital statistics...If you put Nazi there, and then under their feelings about politics under emotional characteristics, it's similar information but broken up into two sections. IMO, vital statistics should include only physical, objective traits such as age, height, weight, ethnicity, etc. Political party and soc-eco status would fit better under personality and history, respectively. Some of the information under the physical characteristics grouping were already included in vital statistics. With the exception of birthdate, the things pertaining to birth place, hometown, etc. should be included under history.

Intellectual/Mental/Personality Attributes and Attitudes and Relationships with others groupings are fairly solid, as is the Likes/Dislikes and Emotions. The Sex Life grouping was really solid and you came up with things that aren't really super-obvious (ie. how they feel after sex, their first experience, pregnancy)

I liked your ideas at the end about development of character, realism, depth, Mary-Sue prevention I'm not really a stranger to character development and I found it helpful and somewhat thought-provoking. Everything was very clearly written and understandable...grammar was all there as far as I know.