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--Edit: Now featuring new category: Sex Life

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For all you writers out there who are looking for a way to add depth to characters in stories, RPs, comics, or anything, this form will help you get to know them way better than you thought you ever could. It causes you to think about the why's and how's of your character's psyche.

For profiles for minor characters see the abridged version here: [link]

NOW WITH Hungarian Translation: [link]
jának magyar fordítása: a Karakter Profil Űrlap ^^ Nagyon hasznos darab, remélem annyira fogjátok élvezni a használatát, mint én a fordítását. A fogalmazási furcsaságokért és a hibás fordításokért előre elnézést kérek, amennyiben találsz benne ilyet, kérlek, tudasd velem, és kijavítom ^^
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Now OFFICIALLY © Fyuvix [link] 8D

Critiques


:iconzmrazenyvlk:
Things I like: That you separated socioeconomic status of childhood from adulthood, 7 sins/7 virtues, disillusions from childhood, chinese zodiac (this is very neglected by most :D), separated nationality and ethnicity.

In the "vital statistics" field, I know what you were going for, but by including birthplace, political party, hobbies, and other non-innate characteristics, it feels sort of redundant because similar information is required elsewhere. For example: political party under vital statistics...If you put Nazi there, and then under their feelings about politics under emotional characteristics, it's similar information but broken up into two sections. IMO, vital statistics should include only physical, objective traits such as age, height, weight, ethnicity, etc. Political party and soc-eco status would fit better under personality and history, respectively. Some of the information under the physical characteristics grouping were already included in vital statistics. With the exception of birthdate, the things pertaining to birth place, hometown, etc. should be included under history.

Intellectual/Mental/Personality Attributes and Attitudes and Relationships with others groupings are fairly solid, as is the Likes/Dislikes and Emotions. The Sex Life grouping was really solid and you came up with things that aren't really super-obvious (ie. how they feel after sex, their first experience, pregnancy)

I liked your ideas at the end about development of character, realism, depth, Mary-Sue prevention :) I'm not really a stranger to character development and I found it helpful and somewhat thought-provoking. Everything was very clearly written and understandable...grammar was all there as far as I know.
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:iconrikoula:
Ahhh! The flashing is gonna give me a seizure! XDDD

..full view won't work for me. :C
:iconplushie-chan:
D= I get the full view thing the whole time. The same when I click.

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:iconblk-mage-kitty:
Cute Full View icon.

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I AM THE INSANE PATIENT OF :iconShub-Yoggoth:
:iconsaetje:
hey wow, thanks for this <3 (you gotta download it to your desktop, people -.- )
:iconrikoula:
Nevermind, I just realized you had to download it. XD
:iconblk-mage-kitty:
Ohh...Welp, im a moron.

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I <3 the Psycho Doughboy's from Johnny ( [link] )
I AM THE INSANE PATIENT OF :iconShub-Yoggoth:
:iconsaetje:
no you're not ^^;; happens to the best of us :3
:iconfyuvix:
^^; sorry bout that, I meant to say Download to desktop... I have to make a download icon >.>

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:iconplushie-chan:
x3 Dun worry about it.

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kewl
i can use this for my dragon shifters
although the majority of them don't have names :P

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