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"I love you more than the flowers love the rain." It was a game my father used to play with me when I was very little. Every night, he'd find a new way to compare his love for me. I was his only son, the only child. When my first sister was born, he would have to find two different ways to compare his love for us every night, and by the third child, he gave up that game all together. I guess it became too much of a hassle, or else he didn't want to spark jealousy amongst us. Three daughters and one boy is what my family became. I was instantly promoted to sous-manofthehouse, which meant no more games for me and Papa. It's been like that for so long, I almost forgot those games…
He ran the family like he ran the restaurant. Nothing was slow-paced, and there was a constant queue of orders. As sous-manofthehouse, I took on the brunt of the responsibilities, while my sisters had few chores. I didn't complain; I loved my sisters and would have done the work for them anyway, even without being told to do so, but with such a big family it was impossible not to be a little jealous.....
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A short story published in today's Pompfiction! Now with Illustrations! I figured it'd be cool if I finally started adding art to the fiction pieces XD hopefully to make it a bit more interesting...
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:iconseishinijoushamegami:
Omfg I'm trying not to cry. DX Poor Ernie! What an asshole-ish dad! *sighs*
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Fyuvix Sep 2, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
Daw thanks XDDD His dad doesn't mean to; He just has high expectations of his only son. XD
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:iconseishinijoushamegami:
Ehhh. :/ Poor Ernie. XD And I found out Silk doesn't like mascara. >_> I placed the tube next to his tank and he freaked the hell out and started charging it. xDD It was soooo cute.
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Fyuvix Sep 5, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
ROFL DAWWW Does it have a black cap or something? It might be because of that. Betta's heads get really dark and black when they want to show aggression (most colors anyway XD), so my betta hates my black-capped pen a LOT. XDDD it challenges his masculinity. XD
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:iconseishinijoushamegami:
LOL Yes, yes it does. XD They're both solid black, lofl. I make it the highlight of my day to move the tubes around on his tank and watch him go ballistic and attack it, lol. But that's cool. XD I learn so much from you, lulz
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Fyuvix Sep 6, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
Kheke n.n
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:iconseishinijoushamegami:
would it be too arrogant of me to ask for you to do a double meme with me? :3
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Fyuvix Sep 6, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
Not arrogant attall n.n though unfortuantely I don't have time for memes at the moment D8 I'm trying to catch up on commissions and webcomic buffer, sorry!
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KelpGull Sep 2, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
I love how you draw from your experiences for these written pieces, it makes them so raw and relatable. This one really struck a chord with me, in particular.
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Fyuvix Sep 2, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
Aw thank you so much!!! I really appreciate it!
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