By all means! XD Just watch Benzi there, I kinda made him very Ronnie-esque there with the hair eyes and nose bridge, but ja, by all means! I'd like to see how you work it into your style!
yeah me too. Every time i draw him in a 3/4 view the far side of his face looks fat. But yeah, i'll probably extend his pomp to better accomodate the uh... What i had in the original plans for his design. Maybe around the length of Leo's pomp(?). The nose bridge i'll DEFINITELY need to work on, it doesn't look too well in the 3/4 views and with the way his nose is positioned i get confused on how his lip should flow. xDD Really, the only things i'll REALLY keep the same here are probably the ears, sideburns, and the back of his hair (like the mohawk part).
Well generally I do them when I have the time, so it never hurts to ask! It also really depends on how or mostly IF I can even help the person, or if I'd wind up reiterating a lot of information I've already done up reference on. Sometimes, depending on the severity of the situation, I can offer verbal critique that should suffice, other people I will do up full tutorials, others might only need a quick redline to fix an anatomy issue, so basically everyone gets a little bit different treatment with each particular piece.
So if you've got something you specifically need help on, I can do my best to offer the most suitable solution. n.n
I tend to not know how to critique when people have too vague of a question like "can u look at my drawrings and give me feedback."
XDDD Yeah no.
I prefer people to be specific on a topic, or even better, a particular drawing. Some people will come to me with a single character and ask specifically "How can I make this design more unique?" or "I need help with dynamism of this specific pose" etc.
I hope that helps ,and I look forward to offering any help I can!
But yeah, totally! I gotcha! I neer thought a character could SO MUCH by just the way their.. their snouts are just shaped. Wow! This is awesome, thank you SO much, fyuvix!
And thank you again for being so patient with me. I know i'm a hand full to teach, so i REALLY appreciate what you're doing, like.. You have no idea.
If may say though; I like the way you've drawn Jezebal here, i really do but she doesn't really look like her mom or Toren.. But maybe i should change up their silhouettes as well to make it fit, no? Me tinx that would be best..
THanks, I'm really glad to hear, Pup! I'm just glad it's a help at all! I wouldn't waste my time if I didn't think you had the potential to be even better than you already are. And ja, you don't have to stick to the revamps here, they're just food for thoughts. You could even try Jez with Benzi's silhouette there, or any mix of any of em. Anyway play around and have fun, maybe even do a whole page of Jez heads of all forms of shapes and combos of snout to head ratios, to see what you like best. You might be surprised with the results. It takes a lot of working outside of our comfort zone to find areas where we can really improve. Thats how I broke out of my anime phase, afterall, I started doing caricatures and I hated it at first, cuz I hated the caricature style. For a long time my art actually got WORSE, but it was for the greater good
Oh believe me, i have LOOOOOOOTS of room to improve. I ain't no kindergartener, but i ain't no Michaelangelo neither.
You got WORSE? Well... yeah, i guess that makes sense since you were getting out of your comfort zone. That takes guts x_x. Hey maybe sometime this weekend you and i could do some character sketches on OC? The antivirus thing FINALLY expired so i can probably do an OC on my desktop computer now (which is GREAT cuz i draw a HECK of a lot better on this computer than my laptop) My main focuses right now wanna be Benzi (yeaugh, i hate that name now >,<), Izzy and Toren. I still need to increase his masculinity.
I did some silhouette boxes earlier today where i tilted his snout farther down and lengthened it and i must say he looks better! Plus i turned Izzy's into a rectangle instead of a square. I thought about the Slasher12 thing that you said and i was like "Fyuv's right.. I need to make her more like a WOLF than a BUNNY." So i did! And she looks fantastic to say the least. I don't think i'll change Jarvis much though. He looks fine as it is. He's a chubby thing xDD.
But yeah, just a few revamp idea sketches of Toren, Izzy, Benzi and MAYBE Jezebel. Oh, i'd like ta work on my ram character too. Make look more.... Ram. xD
What would one have to do to annoy you enough to get one of these?
Well generally I do them when I have the time, so it never hurts to ask! It also really depends on how or mostly IF I can even help the person, or if I'd wind up reiterating a lot of information I've already done up reference on. Sometimes, depending on the severity of the situation, I can offer verbal critique that should suffice, other people I will do up full tutorials, others might only need a quick redline to fix an anatomy issue, so basically everyone gets a little bit different treatment with each particular piece.
So if you've got something you specifically need help on, I can do my best to offer the most suitable solution. n.n
I tend to not know how to critique when people have too vague of a question like "can u look at my drawrings and give me feedback."
XDDD Yeah no.
I prefer people to be specific on a topic, or even better, a particular drawing. Some people will come to me with a single character and ask specifically "How can I make this design more unique?" or "I need help with dynamism of this specific pose" etc.
I hope that helps ,and I look forward to offering any help I can!
OF JUSTICE
Any help will be loved~
Even if you tear everything apart it'll still be helpful.
...Jezebel looks FUNKY. XDD
But yeah, totally! I gotcha! I neer thought a character could SO MUCH by just the way their.. their snouts are just shaped. Wow! This is awesome, thank you SO much, fyuvix!
And thank you again for being so patient with me. I know i'm a hand full to teach, so i REALLY appreciate what you're doing, like.. You have no idea.
If may say though; I like the way you've drawn Jezebal here, i really do but she doesn't really look like her mom or Toren.. But maybe i should change up their silhouettes as well to make it fit, no? Me tinx that would be best..
Thats how I broke out of my anime phase, afterall, I started doing caricatures and I hated it at first, cuz I hated the caricature style. For a long time my art actually got WORSE, but it was for the greater good
I did some silhouette boxes earlier today where i tilted his snout farther down and lengthened it and i must say he looks better! Plus i turned Izzy's into a rectangle instead of a square. I thought about the Slasher12 thing that you said and i was like "Fyuv's right.. I need to make her more like a WOLF than a BUNNY." So i did! And she looks fantastic to say the least. I don't think i'll change Jarvis much though. He looks fine as it is. He's a chubby thing xDD.
But yeah, just a few revamp idea sketches of Toren, Izzy, Benzi and MAYBE Jezebel. Oh, i'd like ta work on my ram character too. Make look more.... Ram. xD